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i have got a very bad feedback on my work so i would like to edit and fix all needed i will attach
my work
assessment brief
lecture presentation the part need to be changed

this was her feedback
“I just skimmed your work it shows you haven’t understood what we discussed in the seminar. Your topic, aim and objectives are still broad. I have commented on your formative about your aim and objectives. Rather than you came up with specific, narrowed down topic / aim / objectives, you only added extra sentence or change few words.

Fourth, your research design plan shows that you haven’t understood what we discussed in the seminar. You just threw different calculations without discussing proper research design plan. I strongly suggest that you went through assessment brief and research design plan area on the VLE again.

Fifth, your project plan shows that either you missed the week 9 seminar or you didn’t focus in the seminar.”