I want the essay to be changed such that it best exemplify these attributes:
1- maturity, reliability, perseverance and responsibility (professional cluster);
2- communication, collaboration, time management, team-work and leadership (communicator/collaborator/manager cluster);
3- advocacy, community service and social responsibility (advocate cluster); and
4- achievements in academic standing, leadership, research and social responsibility as demonstrated by (but not limited to) awards, conference presentations, publications and scholarships (scholar cluster).

Category: Essays